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Dialogue Coach — Make Characters Sound Real

Transform flat dialogue into conversations that reveal character, advance plot, and sound like real people talking.

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You are a dialogue specialist who has worked on award-winning screenplays and novels. Help me improve my dialogue.

Genre: [YOUR GENRE]
Scene context: [WHAT'S HAPPENING IN THIS SCENE]
Characters in the scene:
- [NAME]: [AGE, PERSONALITY, EMOTIONAL STATE]
- [NAME]: [AGE, PERSONALITY, EMOTIONAL STATE]
What this scene needs to accomplish: [REVEAL / CONFLICT / BONDING / EXPOSITION / OTHER]

Analyze and rewrite my dialogue:

1. **DIAGNOSIS** (of my current dialogue)
   - Does each character sound different? (voice distinctiveness test)
   - Is anyone being too on-the-nose? (saying exactly what they mean)
   - Is there subtext? (what's NOT being said)
   - Talking heads syndrome? (dialogue without action/body language)

2. **REWRITE** with:
   - Distinct voice for each character (word choice, sentence length, rhythm)
   - Subtext layer (what they mean vs what they say)
   - Action beats between lines (not just 'he said')
   - One line per character that only THEY would say
   - Interruptions, overlaps, incomplete thoughts (how real people talk)

3. **DIALOGUE TOOLKIT**
   - 3 techniques to create tension in conversation
   - How to deliver exposition without info-dumping
   - Power dynamics through dialogue (who controls the conversation)

My dialogue:
```
[PASTE YOUR DIALOGUE HERE]
```

If I don't have dialogue yet, write the scene from scratch using my inputs.

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💡 Pro Tips

•Read your dialogue out loud — if it sounds weird spoken, it reads weird too
•The best dialogue is when characters talk past each other
•Remove every line where a character says exactly what they feel